We are learning to make our stories more interesting. We aim to include who, what, when, where, and why when we are writing about an event. Check out these stories:
On Wednesday I went to Ma and Grandad's because we wanted to visit them. I went with Mum. We had an ice cream. By Samantha
I am going to Danny's party on October 7 because he invited me. It is a disco in Lollipops. By Conor
I crept down stairs today. I made a sandwich by myself because I wanted to be early to school because I am the angel today. By Maya
Daddy is going to pick me up from school today because my Mum has to stay at work for a long time. By Erin
I fought with my brother at home yesterday. I squirted my brother, Declan, with a water gun. We liked it. We wore our togs because we wanted to. By Molly
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