Thursday, September 22, 2011

More Stories

We are learning to make our stories more interesting. We aim to include who, what, when, where, and why when we are writing about an event. Check out these stories:

On Wednesday I went to Ma and Grandad's because we wanted to visit them. I went with Mum. We had an ice cream. By Samantha 

I am going to Danny's party on October 7 because he invited me. It is a disco in Lollipops. By Conor

I crept down stairs today. I made a sandwich by myself because I wanted to be early to school because I am the angel today. By Maya 

Daddy is going to pick me up from school today because my Mum has to stay at work for a long time. By Erin

I fought with my brother at home yesterday. I squirted my brother, Declan, with a water gun. We liked it. We wore our togs because we wanted to. By Molly

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