Tuesday, November 22, 2011

Principal's Award

Today Rose received a Principal's Award for the following story, which she wrote on her own:

On Saturday James's tooth came out. James told Mum and Dad. They were in their bedroom. I was so excited like James. Mum and Dad were too. His pointy tooth came out.
"He might need some braces," Mum said.
He needs braces because, well, he needs braces.
I love it when teeth come out. I've had two teeth out.
James's one didn't even bleed. It was a miracle. James has got lots of teeth out. I think 15 came out of his mouth. It was so exciting that James's tooth came out. I wish my tooth had come out on Sunday. Hee hee, ha, ha.
James's tooth is lost now. I don't know where it is. Mum and Dad don't know either. Oh well, if he's lost the tooth he's lost the tooth. It's none of my business because I didn't lose it, did I? James did.
It's really cool that James lost his tooth - the lost that means it came out of his mouth.


Well done, Rose, this is a great story.


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